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Old 09-03-2010, 04:35 AM
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I took this pic while location scouting... my wife's the model... it al natural light since I hadn't yet bought my flash then. Editing 100% in Lr.

Please give me your comments. Thanks!

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Old 09-03-2010, 06:25 AM
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really nice shot!
the only think I would do is take out that little grass the pops out right in her face. it's a bit distracting.
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Old 09-03-2010, 10:37 AM
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A. Your wife is hot. Why shoot anyone else? Was this in Monterrey?
B. Nice scene selection and the colors are nice though the saturation work is juuust a bit obvious. Did you use saturation or vibrance in LR.. if you didn't use Vibrance, try it, I think it's more subtle (not that your image is that bad though).
C. Good composition
D. Would have not composed that blade of grass in the middle (the one in front of her face) or would have removed it later in PP.
E. I would have probably made her a bit bigger in the scene.
F. I can see a slight bit of halo that's probably a result of using the LR adjustment brush. I think it's most visible around the top of the mountains and slightly around her body.


All in all, quite a nice photo. I'm only being picky because it's quite a good photo to begin with.

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