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a pic from my first shoot using off camera lighting

do you guys like the vignette on this pic and the dreamy type editing? or is it too much? i have like 6 from the tea party set that i like but i want to get the editing style right first and then edit them all accordingly, and maybe make a collage with them all too.

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Canon Rebel xs
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Flash used off camera shot through softbox at 1/16 power
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exp bias 0step
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Old 08-24-2010, 05:11 PM
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I myself would feather it significantly more, it looks to harsh for my taste.
The picture it self is nice, I like it.
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Old 08-24-2010, 05:16 PM
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I myself would feather it significantly more, it looks to harsh for my taste.
The picture it self is nice, I like it.
Thank you for your comment...i'll try it with it softer. my eyes just get tired from editing and can't decide what i like anymore lol ... i appreciate your opinion
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As mentioned, I think it would work if it were a little more subtle, but I don't think it's needed. It is a gorgeous shot tho.
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Old 08-24-2010, 05:26 PM
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As mentioned, I think it would work if it were a little more subtle, but I don't think it's needed. It is a gorgeous shot tho.
thank you . i tried it without too...just seemed like too much negative space at the top, so thought that vignette would help....i'll try it softer...always good having another pair of eyes ...mine are getting tired today lol.
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Is it just me or is there no thumbnail in the "attached thumbnail" box?
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Is it just me or is there no thumbnail in the "attached thumbnail" box?
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Old 08-25-2010, 02:12 PM
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hmmm....i don't know? it shows up on my screen. i'll delete it and upload it again...see if that works...
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