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Old 08-16-2010, 07:04 PM
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Default It creates the newspaper

The process of the newspaper creation is on this shot. These hands are the chief redactor hands



I would like to be critiqued on contrast and composition. Is it too underexposed?
What do you think? Any comment is great.
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Old 08-16-2010, 07:36 PM
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the composition is nice, the white paper upfront is a bit distracting but not too much.
I would take the contrast to the edge and add a little brightness - you'll like what you get
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Old 08-18-2010, 07:17 PM
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MrJones, thank you for advice
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