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Old 08-15-2010, 09:24 PM
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hello you! I want to know what do yo think about the light in this picture do you consider I should render a light effect? or use a layer mask to make it brighter? Because, even that I took it at the lake thinking that the light reflected was good it was very cloudy.
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Old 08-16-2010, 12:56 AM
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I don't believe in taking a shot thinking: "hey, I'll just deal with the rest in PS". I want to get it right in-camera.

first off, that yellow/black stripe in the bg is totally distracting. I would've shot at some other angel. 2nd, it seems to be a little 'soft'. Like she moved as pressed your shutter release.

It's a good idea but, there's just a few flaws in it.

Maybe a reshoot?
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Old 08-16-2010, 01:26 AM
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I kind of agree with the Joker dude... The bridge as a background is quite distracting.. I would have probably blurred out with a shallow depth of field. Also, she is quite beautiful. I would have experimented with her head tilted at different angles.

Lastly, It's a shame her feet and part of her legs got chopped off. I think the idea is there, just needs more polishing.. (Oh I would make the picture a little more warm, to make it a bit more romantic)

Whoever is the model, keep working with her, she is very beautiful and very natural, just needs a bit more direction.

Good luck, I hope this helped.
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Old 08-28-2010, 10:29 PM
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I don't believe in taking a shot thinking: "hey, I'll just deal with the rest in PS". I want to get it right in-camera.

first off, that yellow/black stripe in the bg is totally distracting. I would've shot at some other angel. 2nd, it seems to be a little 'soft'. Like she moved as pressed your shutter release.

It's a good idea but, there's just a few flaws in it.

Maybe a reshoot?
thanks for your commets I will try to make a reshoot and also post the other photos taken that day.
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Old 08-28-2010, 10:40 PM
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I kind of agree with the Joker dude... The bridge as a background is quite distracting.. I would have probably blurred out with a shallow depth of field. Also, she is quite beautiful. I would have experimented with her head tilted at different angles.

Lastly, It's a shame her feet and part of her legs got chopped off. I think the idea is there, just needs more polishing.. (Oh I would make the picture a little more warm, to make it a bit more romantic)

Whoever is the model, keep working with her, she is very beautiful and very natural, just needs a bit more direction.

Good luck, I hope this helped.
Sure it helps! thank you very much for your commets you were very clear, I understand what you mean..... about the model your right if was her first time and also mine
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