#1 (permalink)  
Old 08-13-2010, 08:42 PM
I'm new here!
  
Join Date: Aug 2010
Location: Winnipeg
Posts: 1
Default Sister in Field
I was just curious what people thought of this shot I took of my sister in a field not far from my house. I am interested in any things that people see wrong with this picture and how to improve it.
Thanks

Nikon D80
50mm
f/8
1/200
ISO 100
SB600 off-camera
Attached Images
File Type: jpg DSC_6613_1.jpg (591.2 KB, 86 views)
Last edited by mateusz39; 08-14-2010 at 04:02 PM. Reason: Missed some information
Reply With Quote
  #2 (permalink)  
Old 08-14-2010, 02:01 AM
dPS Forum Member
  
Join Date: Jul 2010
Location: usa
Posts: 99
Default
i think i like it....the composition and the different greens in the grasses....is it a candid mood shot....or a fashion shot....the clothes are confusing for me....if it is fashion, then the clothes need to be played up.....is it mood?....make the clothing more simple and focus on the movement.....but it looks good otherwise.......just mho....
Reply With Quote
  #3 (permalink)  
Old 08-14-2010, 03:19 AM
dPS Forum Member
  
Join Date: Aug 2010
Location: Massachusetts
Posts: 54
Default
The grass in the pic seems to be overwhelming her. I noticed that first before the girl. Maybe try cropping it out a bit?
Reply With Quote
Reply

Bookmarks

« Previous Thread | Next Thread »
Thread Tools
Display Modes
Linear Mode Linear Mode

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts
BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is On
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are Off


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.4
Copyright ©2000 - 2012, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.

What’s Your Preference?

Daily Digest

Each day we send out a quick email to thousands of DPS readers to notify them of updates. This email is just short excerpt of the first few lines of our latest post with a link if you want to read it all. You can unsubscribe from this this service at any time.

This service is provided by a third party (Feedburner) and you can subscribe to it by leaving your email address in the following field and confirming your subscription when you get an email asking you to do so.

Enter your email address for
Daily Updates:

Weekly Summary

For those wanting a weekly summary of what happens on this site this free email newsletter is probably your best option. It includes a summary of the tips posted to the site each week. This newsletter is subscribed to by over 25000 readers (many who also subscribe to the other options above) - come join the community!

To subscribe to this weekly newsletter simply add your email address to the following field and then follow the confirmation prompts. You will be able to unsubscribe at any time.

Enter your email address for
Free Weekly Newsletter:

 
SEO by vBSEO 3.3.0