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Hi. I am very new to photography, and I am mainly interested in taking family and childrens photos. I welcome any and all critiques
![]() These are a couple of photos that I took of my boys. I would like some insight on what I did right and wrong. I know with the baby I should have moved the grass from his face. Also suggestion on how to take good pictures of moving targets, ie toddlers lol. Thanks ![]() ![]() Aperture: f/5.0 ISO: 200 Flash: Not used Second Photo Aperture: f/5.6 ISO: 200 Flash: Not used I also used Picasa to "warmify" the pictures. Last edited by lputman; 08-13-2010 at 02:54 PM. Reason: 1 photo for critique |
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Your exposures are pretty dead-on, so good job on that. Your lighting is great - no harsh shadows or squinting subjects.
I like your first photo. Although, I would have put him on the right side of the frame in keeping with the Rule of Thirds. Also, watch the edges of your frames. You slightly chopped off his foot. I like where you are going with the second photo, but I just don't think it's quite there yet. The biggest issue I have with it (aside from the grass you mentioned) is that his torso and head just seem to come out of nowhere. It looks kind of awkward. I would have tried to include more of his body in that shot. Also, I think shooting from a slightly higher perspective with him looking at the camera (I know that's not always easy with infants) would have been better. You caught a great smile, though! For general suggestions, keep your shutter speeds fast with children. They move around so much, as I'm sure you know, so you need to be able to freeze their movement. Let them do their own thing. Capture their personalities. You may find that you want to use a longer lens so that you can keep your distance so they don't feel like their being photographed and can go about being a kid.
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In addition to what Nate, Tito and Henry said, don't hesitate getting down to subjects level. It may be a little tough getting back up, but often its worth it. This can give a whole different perspective to the photo.
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HI everyone. I have discovered that I like to take pictures of my grand daughter, I want to learn more about this fascinating world of photography. Not sure where to start. I have been reading about exposure ISO and F/4.0, this has been very helpful. I really like micro photos and have taken a couple of pictures, but the clarity is not there and I'm just not sure what I'm doing. I'm just clicking and hoping for a great shot. I hope to learn how to be patient and knowledgeable about the great pictures that are too come. I'm using a Canon PowerShot A480 I will look up SusanH1970 and ruthie and hoping to learn from them also.
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![]() As far as the lighting goes, I shot this early evening (7ish) in indirect sunlight (it was behind the trees). Is this a good idea for future photos? What is ideal natural lighting? I think I took this in auto mode (can't really remember though lol). Is that a good mode for children, or should I try to use manual mode for them? I have heard of the rule of thirds, even though it doesn't show here, I will keep that in mind! And I didn't even notice the foot, thanks for pointing that out. I need to be aware of these things. For the baby, would you have tried to include his entire body or crop it on his thighs? If I cropped it closer would that look better? I love his little gummy smile. Sorry, it's the mommy in me lol. Thanks again for all the suggestions! Sorry for all the questions, I just need someone's head to pick lol. |
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