On the run

[vikingforlife44]

Grand daughter taking after her parents running in a kids race last weekend. Not bad form for a five year old. Obviously not a great time of day, almost noon, but what else could be improved on.



Camera Sony DSLR-A200
Exposure 0.003 sec (1/320)
Aperture f/11.0
Focal Length 200 mm
ISO Speed 200
Exposure Bias +0.3 EV

[klam]

She would beat me in a race.

The runners behind her also captures my attention too much. I would open up the aperature more to isolate your grand daughter and blur out the other runners.

In post I would blur out the other runners more and lift out her eyes from the shadows. Clone out the runner with the yellow shorts.

[hmcgrael]

She would beat me too!!

I agree with the previous post..I would blur out the runners behind her a bit, and brighten up her face..Although, I wouldn't clone out the kiddo in the yellow shorts..I would crop or either clone out the leg on the left..Imo, it is distracting..While keeping both runners in the photo adds more detail to the story to me. Hope this helps..and TFS!