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Old 07-22-2010, 06:23 PM
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I wanted to get the majestic oaks, train track and the joyful, innocent look on the girl. Could I have done anything different? Please advise!

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Old 07-22-2010, 09:01 PM
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I think its a great photo! Maybe if you could crop the bottom part of the photo (the front of the train tracks), we would be able to focus more on the model and just see the tracks and trees in the background.
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Old 07-24-2010, 03:53 AM
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Hi, I really like it. My first thought was I want to see that face close up...she has a great expression on her face. So, I would make a copy and crop it to a nice close up on the face. My second thought was, this is a very good pic but cropping out more of the foreground would be a good idea...the foreground is not very interesting and that would put more focus on the girl. And as nice as the trees are and everything else, she is the star. She lights up this pic. very nice.
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Thanks guys! I've taken your advise and cropped the photo. Please tell me if this is what you meant! Thanks again...

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Old 07-26-2010, 04:13 PM
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Looks a little too tightly cropped now. Give a little more room at the bottom and try cropping of a little on the left side to get her out of the center of the frame. Very cute photo!
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Old 07-26-2010, 04:30 PM
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How about this one?

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Old 07-26-2010, 04:31 PM
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Lookin' good!
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Susan, does hitting the "like" button on your fb page make me a fan? i don't see the fan button that i used to see on fb pages?
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Old 07-26-2010, 04:39 PM
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Yep, it sure does. They changed it from "become a fan" to "like" a while ago. Thanks, I love having new fans.....errr, "likers", LOL!
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