Black and White Portrait

[trentonmcanally]

Looking to make a print of this for the house and wanting any ideas people might have to touch it up.

Trenton Mc Anally Photography | Low Tide

btw this is my photo and site, not trying to promote my site just wanting critique on the photo.

EXIF DATA:
Camera make: Sony
Camera model: DSLR-A300
Focal length: 35 mm
Focal length (35 mm): 52 mm
Max lens aperture : f5.6
Exposure 1/160 at f5.6
Flash: Fired, compulsory mode
ISO Speed: 100

[imatt.au]

I think you need to increase the contrast in the sky to bring out the clouds more..

[superduperwesman]

I find the pant legs very distracting

[MrJones]

puting the model right in the middle looks a bit boring to me.
I would try croping it a little and take some of the reflection off in order to get a more interesting composition.

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