lake silhouette

[jax314]

This is a picture of my daughter and her cousin while playing at a lake during the evening hours. I obviously worked on the color a bit...but does this work for you? Is it overdone? Is there anything that I could have done to capture the moment better?

Thanks for all of your help.


Camera: NIKON CORPORATION NIKON D5000
Exposure: 1/2500 sec
Aperture: f/8.0
Focal Length: 145 mm
ISO Speed: 200
Exposure Bias: 0 EV
Flash: No Flash

[Snowbound]

I might tone down the orange a tad so that it's not so intense and I'm not a huge fan of vignetting, but it's a great shot. It has the mood of the end of a great day of playing at the beach.

[ShamJolimie]

it would been better if both subjects were standing. and the shot could have been wider. there's a kind of halo around the girl's silhouette. i don't know if it was intentional but it doesn't look natural.