housewife.

[marcus1983b]

another photo shoot with a friend of mine.

[Lightwriter]

Do you have Exif data and a question for us?

[marcus1983b]

i was just wanted to have some general feedback: composition, contrast, sharpness, P.O.V., etc . . .(f4, 1/40 shutter, 100 ISO)

[Niresangwa]

i like the idea of it, might have been nice to have more movement in the story between the components.

composition-wise i think its fine. lighting looks off though. how did you light this? the balance looks off on the girl in the bottom panel. her arm looks warm, her chest cold.

colors are simple, and its not too busy.

did you visualize a dyptych, or was this an after thought from shooting multiple shots of the same frame?

[marcus1983b]

yeah, i see what you mean. the models are just laying in front of an open window, but i also had some soft compact fluorescents lined up along the right side of the scene. that could explain why the tones are off. thanks for mentioning it . . . something to keep in mind next time i am composing a shot. i never planned to display the shots this way. we did a whole series (starting with the disgruntled housewife doing laundry and drinking vodka in a dirty kitchen), and i just had so many shots that i likes, i couldn't limit myself. i ended up with one other diptych and a tripdych. thanks for the feedback.