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Old 06-29-2010, 08:18 AM
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Default An old shopkeeper from Hong Kong

An old shopkeepr

Please point out the weak aspects of this photo portrait

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Old 06-29-2010, 08:59 AM
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I love everything about it, my only nit is that it looks like it has been oversharpened. The sepia conversion really works well, love the expression on the shop keepers face, and the clutter in the background adds to the image. Well done
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Thank you very much kate
I added a bit crispness in shopkeeper's face to highlight its skin texture. Do you think removing the crispness would be better? I feel like crispness popinp out the subject from background... what do you think?
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