woodland walk

[gunners67]

Hi.
I was hoping to get some critique on the exposure and composition of this shot or anything else you feel might have improved it.
All critique welcome nasty or nice i`ll take what i can get



Exposure: 0.02 sec (1/50)
Aperture: f/16.0
Focal Length: 70 mm
ISO Speed: 100
Exposure Bias: 0 EV
Flash: Off, Did not fire

Many thanks

[windrider86]

Very nice concept to start with. The path is nice as it leads your eye thru the frame.
What I see is the person getting lost and blending in with the trees. Maybe a closer crop with a little less foreground would bring her out more

[Ben Holder]

I agree, all this really needs is a closer crop from the bottom.

[gunners67]

I think your right a tighter crop does look better hows this

[Ben Holder]

I like the crop much better.