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I'm new to this so you'll have to bear with me if this is in the wrong place. I just thought I'd post this for some feedback. I've a new camera and lens so I'm still trying to learn it all!

It was my nephew's christening last week and there was a party! I found this image among the many I'd taken of the day. I love the way he is lit up, while all around him is in darkness. I didn't do this intentionally, I probably wouldn't know how to! There has been no post processing at all. It's just a pity he didn't look straight at me - but then he is only 5 weeks old



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I really like how lite up the baby is, very cute. I personally think that you could make the picture look even better by cropping it closer and maybe a few little photoshop adjustments to make it even more dramatic. This may look really good with a black and white or sepia. Just some ideas
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I really like how lite up the baby is, very cute. I personally think that you could make the picture look even better by cropping it closer and maybe a few little photoshop adjustments to make it even more dramatic. This may look really good with a black and white or sepia. Just some ideas
Thanks for that - I tried it in B&W and it did look good. What Photoshop adjustments were you thinking of?
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Thanks for that - I tried it in B&W and it did look good. What Photoshop adjustments were you thinking of?
i took cue from your question and edited your image....

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if this is a problem, just let me know and i'll take it right down....

a quick edit.....moving the midpoint slider in levels to bring up the shadows of the skin and then autocolor for take some of the blue away and rosy up those cheeks.....

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i took cue from your question and edited your image....

if this is a problem, just let me know and i'll take it right down....

a quick edit.....moving the midpoint slider in levels to bring up the shadows of the skin and then autocolor for take some of the blue away and rosy up those cheeks.....

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That's no problem peeper - I don't know very much about photoshop so the differences that can be made from some adjustments is great to see. thanks - you can see how cute he looks even more now
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Peeperita's edits look great. I am still learning about photoshop myself, but I usually start with playing with the contrast and brightness, then I have really enjoyed converting photos to black and white and then playing with opacity and blending options.
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bigfish50,

DPS will give you the opportunity to see how different views show so many possibilities in everything photographic. I mostly focus attention on subject, using darkness, or blurring, or simple cropping (often all three). Here all attention is directed to the face.

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I played with it a little bit too. Because there isn't much color on the photo and there is nice contrast, I kind of like sepia. I also lightened the baby and darkened the hand holding the baby. Just another perspective
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Wow jiminy! That looks just like an illustrator's painting. I'd really like to see how this one was done.
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Thanks. The key is selecting the face, and adjusting separately. There is a layer for overall control of darkening, and a vignette to force attention to face and cover hand on right. Eyes are also lightened and contrasted.
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