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Old 06-12-2010, 12:45 AM
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So I already see a few problems with these myself, but it's too far gone to fix them.

But, if you guys could please take a look through here and bash my photography self-esteem that would be very appreciated. ;-)

The ones I am referring to being critiqued are of the ginger, or the first 9 photos in this album on my FB fanpage LoWhen Tryon Photography's Photos - Portraits! | Facebook

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Old 06-12-2010, 12:57 AM
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Welcome to DPS You seem to be an enthusiastic contributor, and your Flickr indicates a passionate shooter...

...but someone is goin' to ask you to read the Critique forum rules.

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Only ONE new critique request per day (24 hour period) for ENTIRE critique section. Choose your image carefully.

Oh yeah, I totally saw that earlier too. :dodgy:

Well, oops. That totally ruins my plan to spam DPS like a hound dog.

Kidding. But yeah. Thank you.

Edit: But I'll just have to upload from my pc in the future.

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Old 06-12-2010, 01:19 AM
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Photos 4 & 8 out of the 12 are OK - but u need to work a little on the levels and saturation and also do your model a favour by removing a few of the more obvious "skin defects"
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