B&W portrait

[fsendel]

Hi everyone, this is the first shot I post here. Let me know what you think, I wanted to convey a feeling of thoughtfulness, maybe nostalgia. I'm interested in your general thoughts but especially in terms of composition and what could be improved.


Thanks,

FSF

[MovingStill]

I think the girl is too centrally placed in the frame. If she was more to the left of frame, it would allow more of the view out the window, allow her gaze to pass across the frame which could help the mood you wish to portray.

Really nice b&w, I do like the tones here.

[lavitz]

My one cent comment, I think it will be better to put the lady on the left side so it can portray more feeling from the photo, and it will be better if we can see a little more of her face...

[boloto]

I like the idea of the shoot, but it seems a little underexposed and her legs are cut off.

[fsendel]

Ok thanks to everyone for your comments. I will definitely consider them. I'll work on a new crop alternative.