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Hii everyone, I have a chances to taken family portrait of my friend and I really want to have input on this photo
DSC_7255.jpg Here are the EXIF info: Exposure 1/100 f/5 ISO 200 What do you guys think??
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Hi. I would have to say this would be more classified as a snapshot rather than a family portrait. Only because of the composition and what they are wearing. The infant is wearing a onesie which is like he or she is not even fully dressed. The father wearing a T-shirt also seems a little too casual. The flower in the backround is not in a good spot. Looks like it is growing out of the head. Thats just my opinion and I hope it is more helpful than hurtful.
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Hi lavitz, thanks for your suggestion on my photo, here's my thoughts, the yellow flower on top of the lady's head is a bit distracted and i would like to see baby's whole feet, if you back off a little bit, you might be able to include the lady's left arm in the frame as well....
but it is a nice family portrait, the ppl's skin look soft and natural, and the best part is the face expression on everyone is great! so well done! good job!!! ![]()
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Now I realize that I am too close to the subject as the lady arm and baby's whole feet... How about their pose??? is it distracting?? |
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Like others have said - backing off on the framing would allow the feet and womans left arm to be in frame. The flower and green shoot would have been better moved to a different position. Lighting is smooth and even. Due to the closness this may have been hard but the background going a little out of focus would have pulled your attention to the family a little more.
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