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Old 05-25-2010, 06:37 PM
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Originally posted this in the SYS forum. Thought I was in this forum. Sorry!

Hello! I am new to the forums (and photography as a whole) and would love to receive ideas to improve. This pic was taken with the following:
Camera: Fujifilm FinePix S5100
Exposure: 0.007 sec (1/140)
Aperture: f/3.1
Focal Length: 22.2 mm
ISO Speed: 100
Exposure Bias: 0 EV
Flash: Off, Did not fire



I edited extensively with Lightroom. Her face was covered with lunch!! I tried to clean that up and overall make the picture more appealling.

Any thoughts about this pic? Lighting and editing comments are especially welcome.
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Old 05-27-2010, 10:18 AM
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Very nice picture. Very cute girl. The lighting is very good. I had to look very well to see where you removed the lunch
I like the reflection in the eyes.
Good job!
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Old 05-27-2010, 10:49 AM
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Nice pic, love the expression.
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Old 05-27-2010, 08:25 PM
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Nice pic thanks for sharing cute lil girl good job! I have learned tho pics can also be appealing even if its a lil messy!
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Old 05-27-2010, 08:58 PM
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very cute girl, n very nicely clicked. would have loved more dof beyond the face on this one.rest all is very nice ... thnx for sharing.
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Looks like it needs more light on her face. Cute girl. Maybe get down to her level next time.
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