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Old 05-25-2010, 12:59 PM
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Default she asked would you .. i had no other option but to say yes

one fine cold morning while were sitting indoor's, she got bored and then she roared( no that was a joke)

so she asked would you click me and i said sure (did i have another option ) ... the following pic is one of the many we shot, your comments and critique on the same would be much appreciated.

forgive the lined distraction in background, we were working in very tight space.



and yeah .. the most difficult aspect of it was to tell her how to pose and i knew nothing about it. If somebody could guide me to the right resources for reading / viewing about posing it would be great help.

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Old 05-25-2010, 01:05 PM
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She is stunning! Love the dramatic tones.
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Old 05-25-2010, 02:43 PM
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I love it, I think the line in the background, being blurred, isn't to much of a distraction, it sort of works for me, it makes it interesting. Only critique I have is I think her teeth is a little bit over exposed, you're just starting to lose detail. Still a great shot and very natural.
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I love it, I think the line in the background, being blurred, isn't to much of a distraction, it sort of works for me, it makes it interesting. Only critique I have is I think her teeth is a little bit over exposed, you're just starting to lose detail. Still a great shot and very natural.
Background? What background? I didn't notice! She is gorgeous! I love the treatment as well. I will agree about the teeth going too far to the white side. Lost some detail there.
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Please be sure to read thru the guidelines so you'll know what should be included within your posts. Thanks a million!!!
Then, please return and edit your post accordingly. Thanks again
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Dear sir .. thanks for informing me. Also please accept my sincere apologies. I have tried to search for EXIF data but have not been able to gather it so far .. for the rest that i readly remember please find the info below ...

camera : canon 400d
lens : canon 18-200 IS
Flash: yes, in camera one
distance : about 5 feet
additional light : yes one lamp glowing from above, 1 feet before the subject. difused by the
paper lamp shade throwing milky white light. back wall was about 4 feet behind her.

iso was 200 or 400 i remember indoor light was proving weak. and white balance i used for flash compensation.

for post processing, i smoothened the skin, followed by contrast + color bump and finally edge sharpening.

i still do not know how to diffuse flash properly except for using the airline bag and hence the front teeth are over exposed.

i will still try and find the info from exif from my back up disk .. but please give me a couple of days for same as i am out of my house at present.

i hope i have now satisfied most requirements to post, incase i still missed something please let me know.

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