|
|||
|
What an adorable baby! Your focus looks soft in both of them. I would try closing up your aperture a little bit more, maybe to 2.5. And be sure to focus on the baby's eyes. When shooting indoors it can be hard to get really sharp focus and proper exposure unless you have great light coming into the room from outside. Keep shooting! You have a cute subject!
|
|
||||
|
You can still get pretty sharp pics at 1.8. The first, it seems like the focus fell on the woman's hand instead of the baby's face (eyes)
I cannot see where the focus fell on the second pic, the whole image is a bit soft, but soooooooooo cute and well executed. And like PP sd, beautiful subject and looking forward to seeing more.
__________________
Pat 5D, 5DMKII | lenses 24-70 2.8L, 50 1.2, 35 2.0 70-200 2.8 II, 15mm - MY WEBSITE Fan me on Facebook! You don't have to be the best, you just have to be better than last week" - Jerry Ghionis |
|
|||
|
I agree with the comments already stated. On the first pic looks like you're misfocussed on the woman's hand. As far as composition on the first, baby in the middle with a bland empty space with two different backgrounds leaves something to be desired.. I would have cropped a portrait orientation of just the lil tyke and mom's hand. Other than that looks like it'd be an adorable shot.
Second shot, as well is improper focus. I would have stopped down to 2.8 on this one... reason for that number is that 2.8 is the aperture with that lens (I found when I had it at least; I've upgraded to the 1.4 and find the same findings for that lens also) is that 2.8 is when the lens loses its softness and starts to show you sharpness and IQ that is so amazing for the $100 it costs. Also with the main subject so close to the lens, you will still retain a nice DOF and quite nice OOF background. As for composition, I quite like it. I love the happy massive grin on the lady (mom?) in the background and baby's face is just stunning haha. I maybe wish I could see baby's whole head but other than taking a few steps back to capture all of the babe and maybe cloning out that bright somewhat distracting (to me) out of focus highlight in the green bit above that woman's head I quite like it
__________________
Canon T1i 18-55mm 3.5-5.6 | 50mm 1.4 | 15-85mm 3.5-5.6 | 55-250mm 4.0-5.6 | 100mm 2.8 IS L | Speedlight 430 EX II Feel free to edit/repost my pictures within DPS forums |
![]() |
| Bookmarks |
| Thread Tools | |
| Display Modes | |
|
|
Each day we send out a quick email to thousands of DPS readers to notify them of updates. This email is just short excerpt of the first few lines of our latest post with a link if you want to read it all. You can unsubscribe from this this service at any time.
This service is provided by a third party (Feedburner) and you can subscribe to it by leaving your email address in the following field and confirming your subscription when you get an email asking you to do so.
Enter your email address for
Daily Updates:
For those wanting a weekly summary of what happens on this site this free email newsletter is probably your best option. It includes a summary of the tips posted to the site each week. This newsletter is subscribed to by over 25000 readers (many who also subscribe to the other options above) - come join the community!
To subscribe to this weekly newsletter simply add your email address to the following field and then follow the confirmation prompts. You will be able to unsubscribe at any time.
Enter your email address for
Free Weekly Newsletter: