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Old 05-20-2010, 04:59 AM
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comment pls, no editing here, fresh from camera. need critique to improve. this is my 3rd comment but i always get the aligning correction, i hope i am okay this time, thanks
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Old 05-20-2010, 05:41 AM
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nice shot.. but would be better when using fill in flash,, coz the object a bit darker than the background..
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Its a nice shot......a gud composition & the background has put life to the pic....i wudnt hv suggested use of flash as it wud hv over exposed the subject
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I like the colour of your shot however its also good to include the hands of the subject and a bit tight on the left shoulder. Composition wise, you have achieved it. Try to shoot also without the glasses, to expose her eyes. Good luck and keep on shooting.
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Old 05-20-2010, 02:06 PM
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wow thanks for the positive feedback, i guess i am slightly on the right track hehe. as for the flash, yup i thought so too that it might overexposed the subject, and for the glasses, haha she hates her eyebags, but i will try next time, coz the eyes could always make a picture even better, thanks again
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