framing subject in sun glass.

[laurel2sg]

Do you think that I should make the refection clearer?



Camera: Pentax K10D
Exposure: 0.004 sec (1/250)
Aperture: f/2.4
Focal Length: 70 mm
ISO Speed: 100
Exposure Bias: +0.7 EV
Flash: Off, Did not fire

[wal]

Honestly, i think its ok. any more and it would have looked unreal..

[irishmuth]

I think the reflection is clear enough, but I think you were trying to capture the mountains, but my eyes go right to whatever stuff is below the window (laundry?)

[Cathrine]

When I first saw the reflection, I saw the person (are you on a bus?).. then I had to go back again and I noticed the mountains. I don't know how you can fix that... I'm just an amateur.

[laurel2sg]

Thanks, thank you all. ^.^ It's very nice to hear from your feedback.

[GadgetRick]

I love reflections but I don't think this is working. You could try and crop tighter on the glasses but your reflection is too cluttered so I don't think that'll work well either.

Nice idea though.