Family at the park.

[Stoneface]

Would like critique on composition and color please.



God bless,

Rowdy


Rebel xsi
f/5.6
1/80 Sec.
ISO/100
18mm

[CheaperKings]

To me, it looks good but, it's off center...

[fuscom]

I like it generally, but it's a little too straight on a shot. With such a dynamic background, it would be nice to have the adults slide up more to the center (as the kids are) and then experiment with tilting the camera at different angles to get the most out of it.

[Stoneface]

Yeah, I hear what you guys are saying. This was my first "real" shoot with actual human subjects. The parents couldn't have moved up because their shoulders were already up against the bars. If I had it to do over again I'd put on daughter on left, one on right and the boy at the top.

Thanks for the critiques.



God bless,

Rowdy