The shot - did I capture it?

[wannabephotographer]

This might be used in an ad. I think I got it, the turn, the flowing hair, the earrings, the look. What do you think? Anything you would change?

95 mm
F 6.3
1/200 sec
Flash used off camera

[Niresangwa]

Left eye needs lightening up. Also, the lack of the top of her head bothers me. even though I think I recall that the focus was jewelery for this shoot?

This is the jewelery gal, right? I may be confused with another critique post from a few days back...

[wannabephotographer]

Originally Posted by Niresangwa

Left eye needs lightening up. Also, the lack of the top of her head bothers me. even though I think I recall that the focus was jewelery for this shoot?

This is the jewelery gal, right? I may be confused with another critique post from a few days back...

Good memory! Yes the earrings are more of the focus. I guess for the designer she wanted it to convey a certain image of her style. I fixed the eye in this newer version, thanks for the suggestion. If I bring it up more it will start to look weird.

I had a few versions but it seems to work with her head a little chopped off at least this is the version the designer liked.