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Old 04-15-2010, 01:28 AM
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I got a rare opportunity to get a natural smile from her on camera.

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Very nice capture. Here's my version for fun.

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Old 04-15-2010, 06:20 AM
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Beautiful girl and photo! To me it looks a little green and dark. This is my quick attempt at fixing those things.

(although now that I look at it here, there are some spots that are blown now, but you get the idea!)

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Really nice fix by FallinWoman
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Old 04-15-2010, 04:58 PM
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I had a play too, hope you don't mind. Let me know if you want me to take it down. If you like it, I can let you know what I did. She's adorable, really pretty eyes.

This is just a quick fix - if I'd taken more time, I'd have cloned out the stray hairs, too.
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beautiful natural smile! I like the edited version..the original does look a bit dark to me
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Of all the crops I like the close crop by Susan. Brings the focus to her eyes.
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Admittedly I never do hardly any post production edit largely due to not really knowing what I would be doing but also due to time situations. I just started shooting raw and apply the standard color curve to the pics and that is about it. Suggestions on editing techniques are more than welcome.
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Old 04-16-2010, 12:44 PM
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I like the hair .
It shows the pic not set up.
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Old 04-17-2010, 03:58 AM
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I love the edit done by Susan, especially the crop. I feel it really makes the photo. I am only a beginner, but that's how it makes me feel
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