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Old 04-09-2010, 05:08 PM
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Default Looking Up the Slide
This was a fun shot to take but I would love to hear about how to make the shot better. I would appreciate any critiques.
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Old 04-09-2010, 05:46 PM
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Default just for example...for a visual example :)
just my stab at it...

just adjusted the exposure and did a slight stamping over a few places on her face to make it look smoother...

i deleted the pic off my computer...welcome to dps. this site is awesome place to learn. all photographers from all walks of life and beginner - professional come togther to help critique your work. you will learn a lot and try to take critiques as just people trying to help you see your photography better and helping you to grow. some may be harsher than others lol. but sometimes bad criticism is the best to help you grow.
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Old 04-09-2010, 05:49 PM
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oh ya i just did this really quick and if the mom (i suspect) is too bright for your taste you can always just select the child to brighten and leave the momma less exposed...

i just brightened it all for time sake
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