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Old 04-06-2010, 07:28 PM
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I have ever been good at shooting people at all,What can I do to improve???

Camera: Canon EOS 50D
Exposure: 0.125 sec (1/8)
Aperture: f/5.6
Focal Length: 100 mm
ISO Speed: 800

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Old 04-09-2010, 07:58 PM
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I love the light in his hair. I think it would be more interesting if you could see his instrament. The picture makes me very curious as to what instrament he is playing... piano, violyn?
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Old 04-11-2010, 03:32 AM
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Thank you Carrie for your time to look and comment. He is playing the guitar, Next time I
shoot him practicing I will try to get the guitar in the shot all so.

Thank you again fot your time.

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Old 04-11-2010, 12:46 PM
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I really like the idea behind the shot.

The bright spot in the lower left keeps attracting my eye, taking it off of the subject.

You might want to try removing it, (I placed a piece of paper over this part on my screen) and see if it brings your eye back to the center of the sheet music and head profile.

Once you do that, I think you will be surprised at the difference.

Nice work!
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I really like it. I agree with the poster who said to get rid of the bright spots in the left.
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