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It looks pretty good to me
but then again what do I know? I'm just a beginner!BTW: You should as a specific question and post your EXIF info as per forum rules. |
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I'm also a complete beginner, but I think you did an awesome job! I MIGHT add a slight halo/glow to the back of their heads....maybe..?
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Do you NEED to add a warm glow to the kids faces? No, I don't think so. It looks obvious that the shot was taken with a flash so no one is going to assume it was taken by firelight. So this begs the question, COULD you add a warm glow to the faces? And I think the answer is 'yes.' However, it you do I would also suggest you use levels to tone their faces down a bit. The flash is putting a bit too much light in their faces, the baby especially. So, tone it down a bit, add some warm glow with the hue slider and you'll have an image to treasure.
(By the way, it is absolutely unfair that any one woman should have 4 such attractive children!)
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Thank you very much. I love all your criticism in all the forums. You are very precise...which is what I needed. I didn't know where to start with correcting the obvious flash look. I played with exposure and hue saturation a little bit. Do you think it needs even more warmth and less exposure? I don't know if I got it right...looks better definitely but I don't know if it looks like it's total potential? Also in this the background is pretty sharp. Do you think it would look better with a gausian blur?
Oh and thank you for your comment . i appreciate your kind words .
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Thank you gjakovare
. It definitely looks better after the advice from LeeR. I wasn't sure what to adjust...he is always so precise and very helpful in the forums. welcome to dps also. It's such a great community!
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