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To get some experience I posted an ad saying I would do free photo shoots and did about 5, including a family that included this 3 month old, Olivia. I learned a lot, especially when I got home and took a look at my shots close up. I should have noticed that little flake on her forehead and will remove it in gimp or CS4. Lay on the criticism.
![]() Camera: Nikon D80 Exposure: 0.005 sec (1/200) Aperture: f/2.8 Focal Length: 50 mm Focal Length: 50.4 mm ISO Speed: 100 Exposure Bias: -2/3 EV Flash: Auto, Fired, Return detected second photo
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First criticism...you are supposed to ask a specific questions on what you'd like critiqued
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I think it could use more contrast overall. Also, I think I would have liked to see the baby's right ear, or less of his/her right cheek. As it stands, it is somewhat of an unflattering crop. On the whole, though, I like the composition and colors.
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I love that photo.
The baby is so cute.. I also love her cheek..
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I shot the infant initially landscape but it looked weird. Sorry.
Here is the mother and 2 daughters. I liked this one the best, but may have been too close because I had a hard time getting sharp pictures of the childrens face, but the Mother's face always came out sharper. ![]() Same EXIF In almost all my shots, the toddler's denim shirt came out sharper than her face. Any hints?
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