Island Girl: Room for improvement?

[mermaidshells]

Camera: Canon EOS Digital Rebel XSi
Exposure: 0.004 sec (1/250)
Aperture: f/5.0
Focal Length: 29 mm
ISO Speed: 100

Rather proud of this image, but I know there's always room for improvement. Suggestions on how I could improve it?

[tadthephoto]

I can see why you are proud of this, must have taken time to set up and compose. However, I find my eyes being drawn by the narrowing gap between the strands and away from the model's face, and that what's spoils it for me.
T

[gk12536]

I like this shot.
gk

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[haowong]

If her eyes are not naturally crooked, then I don't think she'll like this picture...
Does anyone have an opinion on parts of her face I believe is over exposed.

I'm a newbie (and more technical then artistic) and perhaps, its a photography style I am not aware of?

Thanks