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Old 03-11-2010, 05:31 PM
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I think you need to take a look at the critique forum rules, particularly #5.

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Old 03-11-2010, 05:58 PM
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Sorry, I forgot to add the camera shot information. Here it is:
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What I am looking for is critiques to make this a better picture.
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Old 03-11-2010, 07:28 PM
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He is cute but I think it is a little underexposed. The hat is casting a shadow on his face and I would like to connect more with his eyes. Focus is good....just work on your lighting.
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Old 03-11-2010, 07:55 PM
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He is cute but I think it is a little underexposed. The hat is casting a shadow on his face and I would like to connect more with his eyes. Focus is good....just work on your lighting.
Agreed, except the focus looks a bit soft to me, and it looks like it fell on his hand rather than his eyes. His skin tones are very cool and could use some warming up. Also, watch your backgrounds - the busy background is pretty distracting. Like I said before, he really is a cutie!
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I think he needs to be in orange and blue
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Old 03-11-2010, 08:13 PM
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I just wanted to throw in ...........GO GAMECOCKS............ LOL . Nice shot!
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How cute! I'm not very experienced, so I don't know how valuable my opinion will be However, I really like this! I didn't pay much attention to the background. I found myself scanning his handsome little face. I would say that if you wanted to improve, the lighting on his face would be my suggestion. The hat did shade it some. Otherwise, I like it!
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