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Old 03-08-2010, 11:12 AM
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I was going through some old pictures and found this one. I took it about two years ago for a friend of mine because he wanted picture with a helicopter for his son. It was also about the time where I really started to consider doing more with photography than just snapshots.

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Old 03-08-2010, 03:22 PM
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I like it, but I'd have moved more to the right and zoomed out so he didn't have a helicopter growing out of his head, and so his right leg didn't look like it stopped at the knee. And maybe used a little fill flash to light his face.

Cool shot, though, otherwise.
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Old 03-09-2010, 12:01 AM
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avoid central composition at similar shots, also it would be nice to see all helicopter (don't cut wings or etc) and more of the way the soldier is lookin'
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