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My first posting! I'd love to read any kind of critique of this shot but I'm particularly curious about if the effect of the shot (composition, lighting and pp) seems successful or desirable. Any feedback would be most welcome!

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Old 03-04-2010, 04:41 AM
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I think it's a lovely shot! I like the lighting, very soft. I like the emotions portrayed. The only thing that I would have done different is to have the bottom hand a little lower so as to frame the belly, but that is just my personal preference. And what do I know. :-) I think it's a great shot!
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Old 03-04-2010, 04:15 PM
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Thanks for the feedback! I'll try some with the hands framing the belly - great idea. And I love your flickr page. Very nice shots!
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Thanks for the feedback! I'll try some with the hands framing the belly - great idea. And I love your flickr page. Very nice shots!
Thank you! I hope to see lots more photo's from you soon!
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Old 03-05-2010, 12:36 AM
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I think it's very good...
My only real negative is her expression...it's not peaceful or happy enough. It kind of looks a little "concerned" to me. If she were gazing out into the light (future) it would seem more contemplative. Looking down at her belly she should be obviously "happy/peaceful", at least that's my take.
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Old 03-05-2010, 09:52 AM
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the composition is good and i love the low key
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