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Yup, about the only thing i could say you might want to change for next time would be to have the background consistant across the frame...like all grass, or all concrete... it would place more emphasis on the subject and also make it very easy for your eye to find the two strips of text.
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on the right side, grass isn't blured fully from your hand.
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I love it!
Just watch your blurring the background - I see distracting grass in focus along your left arm and on your right shoulder. I agree about the background a bit, though I like the dark/light play (especially with the text you added)... I would say just avoiding the seperate concrete/utility cover behind you would clear up the background enough to be less distracting. (i'm not a pro by any means, just my thoughts)
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I'd love it if it were a bit less over-saturated. The background doesn't really bother me, though. I really like the composition and perspective. There are a couple of blown out spots on your hands, too. Keep shooting!
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