Photo shoot Critique

[AmberTillman]

This pic is from a range of photos taken with a family friend to test my portrait abilities. Looking for critiques. You can view the rest of the collection at
Gianna's Shoot - a set on Flickr



EXIF Data:
1/60
f/4.5
56mm
ISO 400
On Camera Flash as fill light

Thanks DPS!

[smc1377]

Bump.

Because this thread went into moderation and once approved, it fell on the 2nd page already so I'm giving it a bump so that it shows up at the top of the page.

[AmberTillman]

Originally Posted by smc1377

Bump.

Because this thread went into moderation and once approved, it fell on the 2nd page already so I'm giving it a bump so that it shows up at the top of the page.

Thanks for the bump! I was wondering what happened.

[zona5101]

overall nice job.the blown window light is probably taking away more than adding. The main is a little hot - her hair is gray and skin seems too bright. Specular highlight loss of detail on the lips also seems to indicate a bit hot.

[AmberTillman]

Originally Posted by zona5101

overall nice job.the blown window light is probably taking away more than adding. The main is a little hot - her hair is gray and skin seems too bright. Specular highlight loss of detail on the lips also seems to indicate a bit hot.

Thanks Zona. I should have pulled down the shade now that I think of it. It looks nice, and it is a naturla bamboo, so it still lets in a lot of light....