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Old 07-07-2009, 07:40 PM
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I was the photographer at the Jr High school dance. Here is one of the portraits.

Tear it apar, lighting, posing, comp, ect.

What do you like and what dont you like, what could have been better.

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Camera Make: Canon

Camera Model: Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL XTi


Flash Used: Yes, off camera....... AB800 with SB 4x6 and fill 160 watt JLT with umbrella

Focal Length: 62.0mm (35mm equivalent: 363m...

CCD Width: 6.15mm

Exposure Time: 0.0063 s (1/160)

Aperture: f/11.0

ISO Equiv.: 400

Whitebalance: Auto

Metering Mode: matrix

Exposure: Manual

Exposure Mode: Auto bracketing




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Old 07-07-2009, 09:03 PM
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Hi, I have cropped it to give best composition-as you haven't included the feet,it can't be a full length portrait,and it doesn't fit a 3/4 or headshot format (I have made it a 3/4) with a little sharpening and contrast. Ken
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Old 07-07-2009, 09:23 PM
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Hi, I have cropped it to give best composition-as you haven't included the feet,it can't be a full length portrait,and it doesn't fit a 3/4 or headshot format (I have made it a 3/4) with a little sharpening and contrast. Ken
Thanks, Looks good.

Lighting look ok on it.
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Old 07-07-2009, 09:32 PM
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Lighting looks sweet......nice work!
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