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I forgot to include the settings i've used for each image:
1st photo (image 544) File Name IMG_0544.JPG Camera Model Canon EOS Kiss X3 Firmware Firmware Version 1.0.9 Shooting Date/Time 3/6/2010 3:54:06 μμ Owner's Name Shooting Mode Manual Exposure Tv( Shutter Speed ) 1/6 Av( Aperture Value ) 5.0 Metering Mode Evaluative Metering ISO Speed 400 Auto ISO Speed OFF Lens EF-S18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 IS Focal Length 21.0mm Image Size 4752x3168 Image Quality Fine Flash On Flash Type Built-In Flash Flash Exposure Compensation 0 Red-eye Reduction On Shutter curtain sync 1st-curtain sync FE lock OFF White Balance Mode Tungsten AF Mode AI Focus AF Picture Style Standard Sharpness 3 Contrast 0 Saturation 0 Color tone 0 Color Space sRGB Long exposure noise reduction 0:Off High ISO speed noise reduction 0:Standard Highlight tone priority 0 isableAuto Lighting Optimizer 0:Standard Peripheral illumination correction Enable File Size 4973KB Dust Delete Data No Drive Mode Single shooting Live View Shooting OFF 2nd photo ( image 539) File Name IMG_0539.JPG Camera Model Canon EOS Kiss X3 Firmware Firmware Version 1.0.9 Shooting Date/Time 3/6/2010 3:24:52 μμ Owner's Name Shooting Mode Manual Exposure Tv( Shutter Speed ) 1/6 Av( Aperture Value ) 5.0 Metering Mode Evaluative Metering ISO Speed 400 Auto ISO Speed OFF Lens EF-S18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 IS Focal Length 18.0mm Image Size 4752x3168 Image Quality Fine Flash On Flash Type Built-In Flash Flash Exposure Compensation 0 Red-eye Reduction On Shutter curtain sync 1st-curtain sync FE lock OFF White Balance Mode Tungsten AF Mode AI Focus AF Picture Style Standard Sharpness 3 Contrast 0 Saturation 0 Color tone 0 Color Space sRGB Long exposure noise reduction 0:Off High ISO speed noise reduction 0:Standard Highlight tone priority 0 isableAuto Lighting Optimizer 0:Standard Peripheral illumination correction Enable File Size 5093KB Dust Delete Data No Drive Mode Single shooting Live View Shooting OFF 3rd photo (image 534) File Name IMG_0534.JPG Camera Model Canon EOS Kiss X3 Firmware Firmware Version 1.0.9 Shooting Date/Time 3/6/2010 3:22:15 μμ Owner's Name Shooting Mode Manual Exposure Tv( Shutter Speed ) 1/6 Av( Aperture Value ) 5.0 Metering Mode Evaluative Metering ISO Speed 400 Auto ISO Speed OFF Lens EF-S18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 IS Focal Length 33.0mm Image Size 4752x3168 Image Quality Fine Flash On Flash Type Built-In Flash Flash Exposure Compensation 0 Red-eye Reduction On Shutter curtain sync 1st-curtain sync FE lock OFF White Balance Mode Tungsten AF Mode AI Focus AF Picture Style Standard Sharpness 3 Contrast 0 Saturation 0 Color tone 0 Color Space sRGB Long exposure noise reduction 0:Off High ISO speed noise reduction 0:Standard Highlight tone priority 0 isableAuto Lighting Optimizer 0:Standard Peripheral illumination correction Enable File Size 5011KB Dust Delete Data No Drive Mode Single shooting Live View Shooting OFF Your help and even some guides such as books etc that can point out what the best possible settings can be in a given situation will be greatly appreciated |
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There are several things that I can think of that would help to pull together the picture. First off check your backgrounds and uitilize the rule of thirds. Each of the images have a cool tone to them and could be brought to life with a warmer tone. The models/ friends look like they are bored (or without instruction). Also you can tell the lighting is harsh, casting shadows and such. If you are using and external flash you should try to bounce the light to the ceiling. I hope that this is the feedback that you are looking for. Please remember these are just opinions. The greatest learning tool is practice. Know your camera's limits and try different techniques. Best of luck, Thanks for sharing!!!
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What looks to be most of the problem on these is really just the white balance. It's turning everything too blue. Getting the right WB can be difficult, so you might want to read up on how to set a custom one if you're really struggling.
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Just a quick thought...probably would be better off shooting scenes like this in P mode with your flash up. If you are new to the camera, and it sounds like you are, trying to do everything in manual mode with flash can be tricky. There will be plenty of time to learn manual shooting once you get more familiar with the camera. You also had your white balance set to tungsten...if you wanted to manually select this it should have been on flash, and not tungsten. I suspect that's the reason for the very cool tones in the image. Hope this helps
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You have the white balance set for tungsten, but the flash fired which is what made everything blue like that. Change the white balance to flash when shooting with the flash, or tungsten if shooting with incandescent lights without the flash and you should clear up the color issue.
As to the composition, the third one is the least distracting. The first one has too much clutter on the bed in the background. In the second one, the differing floor textures and the wall-mounted painting are distracting. |
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Also why such a slow shutter speed -- lucky no motion blur. Why not shoot in auto or program mode and see what the camera does and how it looks, and then adjust from there.
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i was shooting the two girls just for fun so i didn;t bother with background-forthground etc. My question is clearly on the colour-exposure i know i could have made a much better angle for background forthground etc. As for the white balance setting my camera does not have a flash white balance mode? it has the tungsten incandense (whatever is called) sunny cloudy and custom and ofcourse the auto. Did the metering made any differnce? i used evaluative
Also my other question that nobody answer so far, is again for any reference-books etc. Is there any book that can give this insight guide on what settings to choose for each photo? for example indoor, outdoor cloudy..nighttime...specific guides-suggestion on what the aperture should be,,what the iso what the shutter etc. ? |
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Here is the quick and dirty method for correcting you color. Open levels in either Photoshop or GIMP and pick up the little eyedropper with th ewhite liquid in it. Move the dropper over to the wall behind the girls and BINGO, instant color correction! Actually there are a couple more steps involved to get it perfect, but this will get you close enough for now.
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