somethings going down.....

[brian hitchcock]

Took this in penn station manhattan,ny

camera:nikon d90
iso 640
28mm
f/4.0
1/10sec
please comment,would love to here some feedback thanks

[Heatcliff]

Is this the original shot? or was there some sort of post processing done?

Other than that, I would rotate the image a degree or two counterclockwise, to align the record market's window to align with the right side of the frame. Also, it would seem there's some 'sphericity' to the photo. I forgot the official name, but it looks like it's rounded.

I love the underground feel however. Additionally, the blurred people look very interesting, and in my opinion accentuate the idea I have with NY metro, a buzzing of activity.

[brian hitchcock]

hello,no i did nothing to the shot except make it b&w in light room.the reason i took the shot was because there is a bag left on the floor no one was claiming and the guy standing around the corner looks like he is up to summin.yeah i see what your saying maybe ill play around with it. just dont want to take out whats going on in the frame...thanks for the feedback

[Sterling]

The photo looks interesting. But I don't feel the story you've told is reflected in the photo. Without your description I wouldn't have paid any attention to the bag on the floor and I'm still not exactly sure which guy you're talking about.

BTW, the forum rules allow only one critique photo every 24 hours.

[brian hitchcock]

oh ok didnt know im new so ill keep that in mind....anyway yeah thats why i put it up. i know whats going on but unless you really look its not right in your face...when i took the pic the guy walking in front of the lens was'nt supposed to be in the shot but after i took it i liked it so i left it and moved on.. i like the pic myself but was'nt sure about others...thanks for the comments

[Heatcliff]

I see the back, and I see the guy, but I agree with above, that was not clear from the image itself.

Tbh, a proper shot would require you to step back more, but I take it this was taken on the platform, so that would be, well dangerous :P