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[Hadianto Sumantri]

attracted by the shape of the building, but is it the right angle because i am now learning how to make picture of landscape, thankyou for your critique



Camera: Nikon D70
Exposure: 0.003 sec (1/400)
Aperture: f/10.0
Focal Length: 70 mm
ISO Speed: 400
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[DuckieLauren]

it is a very nice looking building, but the street light posts are not helpful to the photo.

[Hadianto Sumantri]

Originally Posted by DuckieLauren

it is a very nice looking building, but the street light posts are not helpful to the photo.

Thank you DuckieLauren, i am agree with you about the lamp pole but i can't help it

[KansaiGreenie]

Hi Hadianto,

Another interesting image. (BTW, I just love Carrefour. I shop there all the time.)

...is it the right angle...

Yes I think so. The building looks long, but not flat.

I agree with Duckie. The lampposts, especially the big one in the front on the left side, are distracting. Depending on how good you are with Photoshop I think you can get rid of it. I've done that before.

My advice is to try shooting at a different time of day. How about at night? That way the street lamps are on and the sign is lit up. That might look more interesting and solve the lamppost problem.

KG

[Hadianto Sumantri]

Originally Posted by KansaiGreenie

Hi Hadianto,

Another interesting image. (BTW, I just love Carrefour. I shop there all the time.)

Yes I think so. The building looks long, but not flat.

I agree with Duckie. The lampposts, especially the big one in the front on the left side, are distracting. Depending on how good you are with Photoshop I think you can get rid of it. I've done that before.

My advice is to try shooting at a different time of day. How about at night? That way the street lamps are on and the sign is lit up. That might look more interesting and solve the lamppost problem.

KG

Thank you, i am not so good in ps, and about night shooting i had tried several occasions, but i have problem with my eyesight, thanks for your advice