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Old 12-07-2009, 06:16 PM
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Smile “The Carpenter” series: And then he paints

Hello, I have brought a new picture from my series "The Carpenter". I would like you to critique light and composition in this picture.

Thank you in advance.

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Camera: Panasonic Lumix FZ28
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ISO: 100
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Old 12-07-2009, 08:11 PM
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The thing I liked the best in this is the pulley belt that is up towards an angle. If you follow that along it leads you straight to the frame that is hanging on the wall behind it.
For me, the composition works well. The room is a disaster and its a very busy photo but like I mentioned before, those 2 elements bring it all togther.
The lighting on the other is a bit harsh in some areas
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