Complete Re-work

[nanbil]

This is a complete re-working of the original critique posting at Blue Sky Patch

Considering all the comments made previously:

I asked myself what did the sky patch add to the picture? A distracting focus point.

Do I need it for some reason? Not really.

By cropping it out what happens? I lose a bit of the arch but not enough to over ride losing the sky patch.

I cropped the picture in a 'formal' square. The square creates tension with the rounded arches. Not sure it that's true but it sure sounds artsie.

Even the colour is closer the the real thing now.



HP PhotoSmart R707
Exposure Time : 1/440.5Sec
F Number : F2.8
ISO Speed : 100
Brightness Value : EV6.1