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Old 11-03-2009, 03:58 PM
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Hey I'm hoping for some feedback (good & bad) for this shot, it's also the first post production shot that I'm happy with from lightroom



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Old 11-04-2009, 10:22 PM
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Darkness here is working against you with the handle merging with the background. A touch of side or back light to separate it would help, or maybe dodge it some in post. The foreground clutter is trapping my eye in a horizontal back and forth sweep low, the light horizontal stick being the culprit
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Old 11-07-2009, 08:47 PM
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I think the handle could use a bit more light. I think I'd probably also try to move the kettle a bit off center too.
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