What’s Your Preference?

tigerfight · #1 (**permalink**) 10-19-2009, 02:07 AM

this is my first try at modeling photography.... please respond with any comments you may have.. Thank you!

zona5101 · #2 (**permalink**) 10-19-2009, 12:28 PM

Very nice. I like the side light. I like how placement of the light to the left rear has made the deepr part of the picture brighter. Nice pose and expression. Crop or clone out the light swich. Good job.

tigerfight · #3 (**permalink**) 10-20-2009, 02:21 AM

Good thinking on the light switch... Oddly I didn't even think to clone it and I didn't like the idea of cropping it only because I enjoyed the composition... Fixed it! THANKS!

zona5101 · #4 (**permalink**) 10-20-2009, 04:00 AM

yup that's the ticket. a nice bright, feeling good picture!

aspencade · #5 (**permalink**) 10-20-2009, 04:17 PM

Great pic...I would just like to see the eyes a little brighter and sharper....would realy stand out..well done.....paul

tigerfight · #6 (**permalink**) 10-21-2009, 03:06 PM

This is actually one of the first pictures I have taken with my digital camera... I took 2 days out of my life to learn aperture (apple program), and then I hardly had to do any editing to most of my photos. Thanks for the positive response, I was a little nervous about showing my work for the first time.

PhotoPhix · #7 (**permalink**) 10-21-2009, 07:06 PM

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Originally Posted by tigerfight

this is my first try at modeling photography.... please respond with any comments you may have.. Thank you!

I like the composition very much,although I find her face to be to dark as compared to the white background. The light switch should be cloned out.

Armando

Unsharp mask layer
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drop shadow frame