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I'm working on my composition and would like how it is on this pic! And also How's the lighting?

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Nikon D60
lens : 18-200 af-s nikkor vr2
focal lenght: 200mm
aperture; F/5.6
Speed: 4sec
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iso:100
White ballance : incadescent
Shot in raw
some PP work

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Old 10-14-2009, 02:45 PM
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I really like this picture. The exposure looks about right, and the composition is excellent. You've got leading lines, the rule of thirds, and negative space to balance it out - well done. The only thing I would change is the vignette, as it's a bit strong in my opinion. Excellent work overall, keep it up.
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I really like this picture. The exposure looks about right, and the composition is excellent. You've got leading lines, the rule of thirds, and negative space to balance it out - well done. The only thing I would change is the vignette, as it's a bit strong in my opinion. Excellent work overall, keep it up.
Thanks S.Culpepper !

Thanks cphoniball ! Had to tweak the white balance . also tryied to obide to the rule of thirds .
To think of it , you might be right on the vignetting.

Thank you both for your time!
Very well appreciated .
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