C&C requested

[Pierre81385]

Canon 1Ds mark II
45mm F/2.8 TS-E
ISO 1600



Any comments or critiques are welcomed. Thanks!

[amymnc]

Interesting shot, I love all those lights. Hopefully someone can come along with suggestions. It took me a minute to figure out that there was a train down to the right, but it's probably just my terrible eyesight

[Thistle.]

Hm. I agree, the train was difficult to find, so there wasn't an obvious focal point. I'd say maybe crop it, but I really love all those lights and would hate to cut them, so I'm not entirely sure.

[Pierre81385]

Thanks for your replys! I agree its not easy given the posted size, to see the train. But it was never meant to be seen so small! I really intended a full screen experience. Ah well.

Here's another photo from the same night. Its got more grain since I had to push the exposure a bit, but maybe its better at posting size since it features the train more prominently.