Lines and Light

[RLucas]

I made this image this evening looking through the slats of an old shed. I liked the way the lines converged into the light. I would like to know if all the leading lines are effective, and do they keep you interested? My goal was the the light being the actual subject. I hope it was achieved!


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Device: Nikon D40
Lens: 18-55mm F/3.5-5.6G
Focal Length: 18mm
Focus Mode: AF-S
AF-Area Mode: Single
VR Control:
AF Fine Tune:
Exposure
Aperture: F/9
Shutter Speed: 1s (hand held)
Exposure Mode: Manual
Exposure Comp.: 0EV
Exposure Tuning:
Metering Mode: Spot
Sensitivity: ISO 200

[Aegea]

I do think the idea of the converging lines works, they draw my eye into the picture. It might be even better if the bottom third were cropped - the junk on the floor is distracting. It's a pity about the flare, but I don't know what you could do about that. Maybe some PP expert could enlighten us ...

[beedee]

I think you have succeeded in what you wanted to achieve as I find this photo very interesting and yep the converging lines work for me.
Beryl

[RLucas]

Thanks Aegea and Beedee!
The flare was something I wanted to leave. I took three shots, and this one interested me the most, mainly because of the flare. It had a ghost like quality to it.

[Indigo November]

I like it, I think it would have been better if the trees etc. weren't visible through the slats omn the left side of the frame........JMO.

EDIT: oops, just realized how old this thread is.