1st car shoot C&C plz!!

[guyzer09]

my friends honda s2000. first car shoot! dont be nice cuz i am learning all C&C welcome!

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[Wramo]

The third one is the best, in my opinion. I feel the first two could have been much better if you showed the entire car instead of cutting some of it off. The fourth one is a solid shot.

In general, the exposure, colors, ect. all seem great. The only thing I would work on is the framing in the first two shots.

[wmbtaylor]

I would like the third one better if you had done something different to obscure the license plate. My eye is being drawn to that instead of looking at the car.

[RLucas]

Some of the best auto shots I have seen make use of negative space. The image you have with the door open, is the best one to my eye because of this. The other images with the whole car are just cropped too tight. You shot at a low angle, which is good. Next time,try a few shots with the wheels turned. It will add a sense of movement to the shots. Other than that, these look nice!

Oh boy oh boy... wow, Ok where do I start.

#2 is your strongest photo. Which, could really use some work.

I'm not sure where to begin -

#1 - This photo cuts off the car and lacks a focal point of interest - colors are bland and there's a tree growing out of the hood

#2 - Is decent, but falls short. I'd suggest using symmetry if you are going to do an open door shot

#3 - Crop is too tight, back ground is just wrong and too close.

#4 - Not tight enough, too far back. Get closer.

Overall these shots are pretty weak, sorry to be blunt.

In all honesty you really need to pick up some car magazines. My favorite for photography is Top Gear, their automotive photography is just amazing.

~Eric

[guyzer09]

thanks everyone for all the tips. I know i got alot to improve on!! i was on a slight incline hill so everything was kinda odd when taken. i had to do alot of rotating of the pics. I honestly think the backround bites!! but it was what i had to work with!! the sun was so bright out at that time of day so the few shots i took in the sun were really bad!!! LOL