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Old 08-22-2009, 05:11 AM
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Fountain located in an inside garden/conservatory. I like the image, but always struggle with composition of photos, in general. Any suggestions as to how I can improve this image, especially in regards to composition? Also, do you think the focus is on the right part of the image? Or should I have focussed on a different part? Thanks!
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Old 08-22-2009, 10:57 AM
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Hi shell,

Personally I like the composition and how you stopped the water. The things that seems to distract me is that for me the lip of the fountain seems to be pretty bright (could just be my monitor). Have you tried this in B&W. I love both color and B& but B&W is my ultimate favorite. Keep in mind that I am not a professional, I just know what I like.
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