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Old 07-26-2009, 10:16 PM
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Default How can they be better? Car show pics.

I just think they aren't good enough. Please tell me. Are they ok? How can they be better? All are SOOC.



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Old 07-27-2009, 01:57 AM
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Bumping it up. Is it so bad no one wants to tackle it?
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I don't know I kind of like it. Not sure how to "better" it. Maybe tone the color a bit but I think the yellow pops well.
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Old 07-27-2009, 02:42 AM
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Kind of like it? lol It is growing on me too. Check out my others.
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Old 07-27-2009, 02:54 AM
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kind of because it is a neat perspective and angle. So kind of in a GOOD WAY! lol
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Old 07-27-2009, 03:01 AM
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Well, good is nice. Better than bad. Did you look at the others?

Holy crap, look at that! I am no longer a NEW member!
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Old 07-27-2009, 04:05 AM
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i have shot a few car show photo shoots.

i think if you had a wider view of this, or perhaps a macro shot of the lights, would make this photo better.

(i wasn't able to view the other photos)
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Old 07-27-2009, 04:12 AM
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I wanted a wider shot, so I am glad I was thinking the right way. But it was a car show, and I was trying to keep people and other cars out.

Didn't think about the macro though. I used it earlier in the day.
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Thank you very much for the lesson. I knew that I can do this in better way.



taux pret auto - taux pret auto differe selon la rise en compte ... calculent automatiquement le taux pour un prêt automobile donne.
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Old 07-28-2009, 03:34 AM
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Thank you very much for the lesson. I knew that I can do this in better way.



taux pret auto - taux pret auto differe selon la rise en compte ... calculent automatiquement le taux pour un prêt automobile donne.
Lesson? lol

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