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Old 07-24-2009, 07:25 AM
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Default Please critique my second try on Amsterdam port

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Focal length: 50 mm
Iso 400
1/250 F 8


I would like to have some critiques about my shot and my post process.

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Old 07-24-2009, 04:08 PM
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I think there should be a bit more contrast in the picture. Also I find it hard to identify what the focal point of the shot is.

Otherwise it is nice
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Old 07-24-2009, 11:29 PM
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I agree that it's a bit difficult to find a focal point in this, but I must say, this really makes me miss the Netherlands.

Het is over twee jaren sinds ik van het nederlands (ik heb een jaar in Leeuwarden gewonen) vertrekt. Er zijn hele mooie gebouwen om te photograph (ik heb die wordt kwijt) in Amsterdam. Ik hoop dat je neemt vol advantage van die mooie plaats.
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